Posted by VividLucidity 1 year ago Report

I have to say, it was quite the welcome change of pace to have a more human like predator! It was a lovely story at first. But I must say, and this is a bit of a spoiler to do so, but...

Amber talked a lot of smack for someone in eating range, and she learnt about that the hard way!~

Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report

Thanks, I definitely have a great appreciation for giantess-type scenarios (Or the other way around like here, where the prey is tiny) in addition to the weird creature predators.

Yeah, Amber would have probably had a much better day if she had thought before she spoke a bit more. x3

Posted by Vision 1 year ago Report

Thank you so much again for this, it was fantastic getting a chance to commission you!

Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report

Of course! Thanks for the fun commission, and being so patient with my infamously slow pace of writing! xD

Posted by Moonlightshadow 1 year ago Report

This was clearly a not very good family. They didn't even tried to ease the younger sisters into it. Just straight up went for buffet, allowed their friends to come over, didn't tried to actually escort them into the building for the first time...
u _u

Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report

Haha, that's for sure. I think you could safely categorize them as dysfunctional. xD

Posted by Nalzindar 1 year ago Report

Slightly unusual as you said, but not far from how your usual stories goes^^
It was quite an unusual spa, and although I will praise Amber and Carolina's sense of righteousness, though their sense of self-preservation was rather poor from the very beginning of their shrunken situation XD

I greatly enjoyed the mass vore theme and that the mother and one daughter didn't mind eating her siblings when it came to. Though I would also have enjoyed the situation if the last daughter came and ate her sister, unaware of it before being told about the situation.

The conclusion to your story was anyway a very familiar one, the internal scenes was superb and the predators' satisfaction of having eaten a bunch of lovely young women were right on spot : )

Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report

Thanks! Yeah, I think this was definitely a case where righteousness overwrote self-preservation by a bit. xD

I do love me some mass vore, so I'm glad you liked this latest example from me. x3

Posted by randomguywhosthere 1 year ago Report

Personally, this is one of my favourite kinds of vore scenarios. Regular people, but some of them are smaller, and therefor food for the bigger people! I especially like the predators' perspective and the descriptions of the textures of all the lovely women being tasted and swallowed.
I aspire to one day be as good as you at writing vore stories.

Posted by PrinnyDood 1 year ago Report

Thanks, this was quite a fun scenario to work on!

Well, I wish you luck on your quest of self-improvement! Practice is the universal constant to improving any skill, so as long as you keep it up, you'll get there before you know it.